I think the overall general look of it might work. However, to me, it gives a very friendly vibe. Is there a way to make it look more 'mechanized' and maybe grittier or darker?
I agree that the first one is too friendly, although it reads very clearly and I like it. For the second one, it's hard to tell what I'm looking at. I'm guessing it's the robot's head, but it could very well be an ink blot. If my mind isn't able to label and categorize an image or idea, it's hard for me to remember it.
The logo is sweet! Love it! Lets go with it. I like the font for the "GRIDIRON" as well. can you try few more versions of the font? and also give it textures or something to look like a title
I think the overall general look of it might work. However, to me, it gives a very friendly vibe. Is there a way to make it look more 'mechanized' and maybe grittier or darker?
ReplyDeleteI agree that the first one is too friendly, although it reads very clearly and I like it. For the second one, it's hard to tell what I'm looking at. I'm guessing it's the robot's head, but it could very well be an ink blot. If my mind isn't able to label and categorize an image or idea, it's hard for me to remember it.
ReplyDeleteThe top of the head can still look like a mantis in my opinion. But otherwise, works for me.
ReplyDeleteThe logo is sweet! Love it! Lets go with it.
ReplyDeleteI like the font for the "GRIDIRON" as well. can you try few more versions of the font? and also give it textures or something to look like a title